Saturday 28 February 2015

Adaptation (B): More 'The Bear' Development

More 'The Bear' Development
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After having a better understanding of 'The Bear' character I decided to refine his thumbnail into a more detailed sketch. I have added and combined several ideas from my first initial sketches. I think Numbers (1) and (4) work the best.

4 comments:

  1. My favourite is (1), but maybe with the pattern from (4) or (5) subtly within the dark part of the clothing rather than the light :)

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  2. Hi Heidi

    I would say number 6 with some extra details. I think in all your drawings the chest is too 'blank', it needs breaking up with a small detail...a few small curls, something in the fur that resembles a clasp (too hold a royal cloak together etc)? Also, whilst I think your drawings are good they're a little bit 'something and nothing' - in simple terms they're very loose drawings which are not quite specific or detailed enough yet to flush out the entire character. This particularly true of the eyes/ face..I find myself trying imagine the rest of the drawing. If you're going to make these in 3D at some point they need to take on a more specific form eventually.

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  3. Example...

    https://www.filesanywhere.com/fs/v.aspx?v=8b6e6b8e616574b09fa7

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    1. I totally see what you're saying, Alan. Definitely needs that patten on the chest. His face is still 'blank' at the moment as I would like to experiment with different facial features eventually. But adding just a bit of detail can make him come to life. :)

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