After your feedback I went back and tried some of your suggestions and I believe they have been successful. Specially number (1) with the overlap of clothing. Any other suggestions or do you think I have found 'her' now?
Yep number 1 is good. A nice mix of dynamic flow and elegance. I'd move on now to something else and come back to her later...There will be very minor things you can add (small details) that might occur to you after a bit of time away - Eg the shoes, the ends of the sleeves / tousers etc. They may even be solved with colour (something you haven't explored yet).
Hi Heidi
ReplyDeleteYep number 1 is good. A nice mix of dynamic flow and elegance. I'd move on now to something else and come back to her later...There will be very minor things you can add (small details) that might occur to you after a bit of time away - Eg the shoes, the ends of the sleeves / tousers etc. They may even be solved with colour (something you haven't explored yet).