tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-154760374061891642.post7786448105045012425..comments2023-09-15T01:25:22.246-07:00Comments on Heidi Grover: Film Review: Metropolis Heidi Groverhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08431164921168465412noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-154760374061891642.post-19116510987393973752013-10-01T22:19:34.054-07:002013-10-01T22:19:34.054-07:00Every review is better than the last - well done! ...Every review is better than the last - well done! Some really insightful observations here, and a suitably academic style... just a couple of little points, though. Maybe the beginning of the paragraph where you are comparing the magazine covers to the image of Maria, could also have been written in the 3rd person, so maybe something like ' A similarity can be seen between the Android Maria with one eye closed and with a devilish grin, and the iconic i-D magazine covers' .<br /><br />Finally, just double check your referencing conventions; you need to reference Quentin Crisp as (Crisp, s.d) within the text - 's.d' means you do not know the date. And who is Ezra Pound? Thy don't seem to be referenced at all :) <br />Look again at the referencing guide on myUCA for full details on how to reference a website - you are still missing a few details. <br /><br />But definitely getting better every time - well done :DJackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.com